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发表于 2018-11-21 20:07:36 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom,the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates,two of which arrived later.I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father,but he had to leave to home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.

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It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walkwalked into my new high school. After registeredregistering in the classroom,thea volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates,two of whichwhom arrived later.I got to know my new roommateroommates immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father,butyet/﹨but he had to leave tofor home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after memyself and live independently.Not until then ∧did I know my senior high school life had realreally begun.
第一处:walk→walked。考查动词时态。根据“It was on a warm autumn day”可知,事情发生在过去,故用一般过去时。
第二处:registered→registering。考查动名词。after是介词,后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语,故用动名词形式。
第三处:the→a。考查冠词。volunteer是可数名词,且第一次在文中出现,故用不定冠词修饰。
第四处:which→whom。考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,应用whom引导非限定性定语从句,在从句中作介词of的宾语,修饰先行词five roommates。
第五处:roommate→roommates。考查名词复数。由上文的“I had five roommates”可知,室友不止一个,故用复数形式。
第六处:删除but或将but改为yet。考查连词。在英语中,although和but不能同时出现在一个句子中,故删除but。也可将but改为yet。补充:此处也可将Although删掉,但是语意上没有修改but好。
第七处:leave后的to改为for。考查介词。leave for意为“前往”,为固定词组,符合语境。
第八处:me→myself。考查代词。与句子主语I呼应,应用反身代词,意为“照顾好自己”。
第九处:then后加did。考查倒装句。not until置于句首时,常采用部分倒装,即把助动词放在主语之前。由时间状语then和下文的时态可知,此处用一般过去时,故用did。
第十处:real→really。考查副词。修饰动词应用副词,故将real改为really。
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